A toothed caterpilar, equipped with a mohawk.
A lemon whale, with a hint of lime.
A bunny hiding behind a sly smile.
A pair of shy clam eyes.
A black mallard, outlined in sunset.
The swirled toungue of a chamelon,
Erupting from the mouth of an enormous fish.
Luscious flounder lips, flung about the canvas.
A triplet of alien eyes, protruding from a small intestine.
A suttle elephant, named Phinneus, graced with the symmetrical beauty I wish i had.
Flowers blossoming out of an orange creme sickle colored turtle shell.
A green long lost dinosaur at a loss for words.
If one word were to come out of your mouth, what would you say?
Hi or bye?
Stay or leave?
Love or hate?
I would love to say hi, and I wish you would stay.
Oh but thats so many more than one.
These colors are feelings.
This picture is a brain.
Surrounded by ruby red blood.
Filled with creativity, color and life.
Waiting.
just waiting.
To break free.
1.) The voice in the poem is very...descriptive, and weird. The things that are being described are very odd, and you wouldn't think about it.
2.) The mood is very humorous and silly, its not really meant to be serious at all.
3.) Uhmm... im thinking a lot of hand gestures, and perhaps some jumping around, but ya know, im not too sure.
4.) What frightens me is just me making a fool of myself, which usually i could care less about, but for some reason im really nervous for this.
5.) I believe that performing the poem enhancing the meaning because it gives the poem a mood, and if you're not sure about what its about the gestures could really help clarify. The voice can help to if you thought it was sad, but the reader reads the poem happy obviously that's what it is.
English III and English IV
13 years ago

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